Breath – (Prose from 3 words) with voice

breath, whisper, dream –  these 3 words have come from Beck at becwillmylife - thank you Beck – I hope you enjoy.My first attempt at sound recording and yes I was nervous.

 

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I dream of the day we first hugged, my arms
around you holding tight; never letting go
for a million years

Oh how I loved you THIS much

I remember the flower that you picked
a yellow daisy from the ground
I loved you as wide as my arms could spread
those days seem so long ago, through childhood
and adult years;  you kept me safe
I hung on every word you said
back when we were innocent

but

innocence does not stay around
captured moments as a photograph
replaced with pain, lies and distrust
and as I sit amongst the daisies
remembering what we had

I whisper in one breath
don’t ever come near me

again

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38 thoughts on “Breath – (Prose from 3 words) with voice

  1. That was BEAUTIFUL Jen…
    Truly, that came from a place that not many can take it from.
    Brilliant, full of soul, hurt, emotion,

    It was real. Just Wow…
    X

  2. Love it! Excellent, both the poem and the recording. Well done Jen. You have a great speaking voice. I can imagine you on the story telling radio station I sometimes listen to (trying to fall asleep) I think it’s for the blind?

  3. Lots of chills listening to your voice Jen. Really really brought your words into my heart, well done I could see her picking off the petals as a child… loves me …but now loves me Not !! xxx

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