Transparent teardrop that trickles down thy cheek
followed by another, if you could
what would you speak?
Transparent teardrop trickles down thy face
followed by another its path
it tries to trace
Could you tell me why you fall
upon skin so young and fair?
droplets of silent emotion
is there too much pain to bear?
Or perhaps that it is laughter
that brings you upon fair cheek
laughter welled from inside
it is from happiness you peek?
We can look upon the face for signs
as to the reason you have come
so transparent teardrop
are you here from a smile or a frown?
We cannot read you, we only see you flow
are you here from pain or joy
the answer we do not know
Written whilst sitting in my car at lunch-time.
When you write like that Mumsy….Tears I think have gone! *sigh* come back!
I think I still have a lot of healing to do! Your really special mumsy. xxxxxxxxxx
Naaaaw sweety I think you are healing just fine 🙂
I try to evoke emotion with my ramblings…I’m sorry I may you sad, but I am also glad that it made you feel
Luv Ya xxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is true! *smiling* xxxxxxx
Oh my…this is beautiful…and you tell me about writing beautifully…I am impressed!Thumbs up!
Thank you lovely..thank you, kind words mean a lot to me, appreciated. xx
Beautifully written words Thank You
Hi Eunice – Thank you also – I am quite taken back by the response on this, I am glad you and others enjoyed reading it though.
xx
Much Love was felt
Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing!
You are welcome – thank you Beck :-)xx
If I could speak
I would speak of your joys…..
timeless moments
wrapped in the esctacy of your beloved…..
If I could speak
I would speak of your sorrows……
of moments in time when
no others were there…..
The path I trace
down that silken face
is merely the journey
of your heart
and of your soul…….
I hope you don’t mind but your words inspired my words……
beautiful poem that you wrote……
Ivonne I am glad that my words did that for you…thank you for yours also I loved your line – The path I trace down that silken face – beautiful xx
I couldn’t help myself it was just an automatic reaction…….to your beautiful words…….
This is a beautiful poem – thank you so much for sharing 😀
Thank you also Di – you are also welcome 🙂
I love when something just comes out. Has to be written. This had that feel to it. Well done Mumsy.
Thank you Angel…welcome back 🙂 xxxxxx