Do you lie frozen under the covers
Cannot move to face the day
Is your body frozen in a moment
Seek shelter to keep your tears at bay
Do you dare not breathe to hard for that will make you think
Motionless, still you lie, for you fear your soul will sink
Do you lie frozen & find solitude with covers pulled up high
Breathing like a waveless lake in submission with your heart
Not responding to your surrounds or life
You have aches and unseen wounds for being apart
Longing your thoughts a simple adieu
Slowly waiting to gain control so you can be …you
Scared of what will happen next
Unsure of the tomorrow
Love been lost, you’re uncontrolled
Your body limp, your mind perplexed
Why has he left, does he also ache
You look at the ring…your love..your insignificant keepsake
Breathe in and out again sweet one
For you will gain your control
The covers can go down again
And you will soon again be whole
Mumsy is there a hidden meaning?
The amount of times I’ve laid in bed daring to breathe …. tears rolling down my face… being as silent as I can so my husband doesn’t hear…is endless!!
BTW: are you having trouble with Word Press? Followers are going into Spam and I’m not getting all my notifications! *strange* xxxx
Hello darling…no… no hidden meaning as per usual I wanted to write argghhh and this is what came out.
I am sorry that you have tears😦 It was just about a young girl breaking up with her B/F.
No I don’t seem to be – though your comment has not come up on the post…Huston they have a problem?
xxxxxxx
PS I only saw what you wrote because my notifications icon was flashing…hmm maybe there is a hiccup?
Bugger! Don’t know how to fix it? *sad face* lol x
I love that this poem is a question and seems to offer so much solace.
There is an Aware here for you Gabriela if you would like to pick it up🙂
Gabriela thank you… I do treasure when you visit. Some nights I sit hear and an idea spring into my head and you can’t imagine why the thought even arose, but yes I was trying to portray a break up of love and though there was pain there was also strength to be found.
THANK YOU for visiting.