Lost Love (Re-posted from 20 lines a day)

Do you lie frozen under the covers

Cannot move to face the day

Is your body frozen in a moment

Seek shelter to keep your tears at bay


Do you dare not breathe to hard for that will make you think

Motionless, still you lie, for you fear your soul will sink


Do you lie frozen & find solitude with covers pulled up high

Breathing like a waveless lake in submission with your heart

Not responding to your surrounds or life

You have aches and unseen wounds for being apart


Longing your thoughts a simple adieu

Slowly waiting to gain control so you can be …you


Scared of what will happen next

Unsure of the tomorrow

Love been lost, you’re uncontrolled

Your body limp, your mind perplexed


Why has he left, does he also ache

You look at the ring…your love..your insignificant keepsake


Breathe in and out again sweet one

For you will gain your control

The covers can go down again

And you will soon again be whole

7 thoughts on “Lost Love (Re-posted from 20 lines a day)

  1. Mumsy is there a hidden meaning?
    The amount of times I’ve laid in bed daring to breathe …. tears rolling down my face… being as silent as I can so my husband doesn’t hear…is endless!!
    BTW: are you having trouble with Word Press? Followers are going into Spam and I’m not getting all my notifications! *strange* xxxx

  2. Gabriela thank you… I do treasure when you visit. Some nights I sit hear and an idea spring into my head and you can’t imagine why the thought even arose, but yes I was trying to portray a break up of love and though there was pain there was also strength to be found.
    THANK YOU for visiting.

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