Don’t Drink and Drive

Like shavings from his beard

sweat trickled

remorse soul

none to begin

a life taken away

caring not for family

or loved ones from 

his undertaking 

unconscious 

to surroundings

till truth shook 

awakening the cruelty

images scant

mind numbed

until now

what he had done

what had he done

ramblingsfromamum 29.12.2012

7 thoughts on “Don’t Drink and Drive

    • How sweet – thank you again Beck..it’s hard to steer away from ‘rhyme’ as that is what I have been use to writing. Others who read prose may say it’s just words ie ‘simply writing’ that’s why there has to be a message. Appreciate your comments 🙂

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