twisted cotton threads
words inside my head
taking upper hand
straining to be heard
senses peaked to write
brain in overload
can’t control the flow
I must continue
no words are left
Really enjoyed this one! I particularly like your choice of ending: in situ
Thank you Stephen, more than you could know. To have talented poets comment on what I write is …well a writers dream. Appreciated and thank you for stopping by 🙂
Thanks for dancing through my blog and leaving a trail of comments behind you.. Encouragement and taking the time to leave comments is always appreciated.
Stephen I could say one good dance deserves another don’t you think? 🙂 You are most welcome and I still have more to catch up on. We all appreciate comments and encouragement for we are but human.
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Getting stronger again. I’d tweak here… but if you want to , email this and I’ll tweak in private (ooer!)
I can’t stop laughing at your ooer! ok let’s go private 😉