Decastich is any whole poem or free verse of 10 lines.
My eyes weep not from sadness but from
the gentle warm breeze that floats this
night, shuffling bare feet in golden grains,
marking the sand with a slide of foot,
tasting the sea air as it rests on my lips,
watching the half-moon hide behind clouds,
reaching out to touch stars that light up
the darkness, gently embracing the glow of
midnight light that bathes the darkened seas,
inwardly smile at the beauty that surrounds me.
That was so beautiful, Mumsy!! night night sleep tight! Don’t let the bed bugs bite!! Lol xxxxx
Thank you hunzzz π xxx
So beautiful!
Thanks Mel π x
Beautiful, Ramblings!
Ta muchly Lyn π x
mmmh, love the ‘golden grains’… i can feel their warmth just now (and it’s snowing outside)… thank you for the brief vacation…
Thank you Miri – hopefully it did remind you or take you somewhere other than the cold π x
Ilike that….it makes me remember the beach again.
And I like the description on the type of poem … and why it makes it that kind of poem.
Good – I’m pleased π Yes I’m going to try some different forms now and then just to test myself a wee bit – thanks Katie π x
How beautiful is this one. I am learning more and more about types of rhyming and verse. Really great mumsy, You took me to the beach, a faraway land and I sat there on my blanket watching the constellations, so close, it felt like the universe was mine.
xxx
mwaaah for your beautiful comment ….the Universe is YOURS darling…it is xxxxx
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