Toddaid – Planet Gazing

Here is my first attempt at a Toddaid. A stanza comprising of a 10 syllable line, alternating with a 9 syllable line. A syllable towards the end of the 1st line rhymes with 1 in the middle of the 2nd line. Similarly lines 3 and 4. Lines 2 and 4 rhyme with each other.  This took a bit of working out I can tell you!

Gazing to heavens, seek Venus or Mars
not behind bars or caged, I stare
surely you are there, do show yourselves now
light the darkness if thou will, show me where

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