For Picture it & write Another challenge is set, our brains go into over-drive, staring at the picture, letting our imagination go wild for our interpretation and our words.
This key
crafted in
stirling silver
rested on a
satin pillow
safe in the
Captains Quarters
hidden from the Crew.
unlocked his wealth
his treasure
his gold
to be treated
with the utmost
respect
to valuable
to be thrown
onto a shelf or
not lain on
the finest of fabrics
gave him a reason
to go on each day
risking his life
protecting the
men that
worked under his
command
encouraged him
when the
waters swelled
against the bow
and rocked his ship
mercilessly
in the storms
that there was
a meaning
to it all
this key
that he held
sacred
gave him untold
pleasure
when he unlatched
the strong box
his motivation
to continue
the fight
across the seas
This key
unlocked what
he desired
most in this world
the one and only
photo of his wife
and child
….his only loves
For this key
was the instrument to
return home once again
safe and alive
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Nice 🙂
Thank you honey 🙂 getting late for you now isn’t it?
The words “satin pillow” and “sacred” were what jumped out at me here. I thought the pillow was a stretch… when it was one of my immediate impressions, and there is something about the keys that suggest it is not locks, but something more sacred that they unlock. A wife and child sound deserving. ♥
I know, I juggled with the pillow aspect.
Returning to family indeed was the reasoning.
Thank you Anne.
Just beautiful! xxxxxx
Ta honey bunch 🙂 xxx
The last stanza was my favorite. This is really good writing.
Thank you Bo (I think mine too just quietly) 🙂
The most valuable treasure indeed. No one can put a price on it!
Hi Joe – I thank you – no, you are right no one can – reason for living.
you have such a wonderful creative mind. I love coming here and reading your stories that you weave!
Creative or just full of it? 😉 – either way I love that you love reading me 🙂 xxx
Well you and I are full if it sometimes but that is part of our creativity and fun
Absolutely beautiful!
Mwaahhh to you friend – thank ye xx
fantastic poem 😀
Thank you Ela very much 🙂
Aud – what’s this ‘sometimes’ crap you speak? 😉 xx
So lovely!!! I’m a new follower from Italy!! See you soon…
Hello and thank you popping by, appreciate your comments and for the follow, look forwards to seeing you again. 🙂
Oh, what an exquisite final paragraph! Absolutely beautiful. A great story woven. I didn’t expect the family to be the prize. But… it is, isn’t it? Our friends, family, and our beloveds are the most precious prize of all. Great poem! Thanks for contributing this week. 🙂
– Ermisenda
Ermilia thank you very much – enjoyed the challenge as usual, keep up the good work. 🙂
brilliantly written.. i very much love that the treasure he’s protecting is his family! wonderful.
Thank you very much also kz, yes the treasure that we must hold onto, appreciated.