Temptation
Ramblings From A Mum
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Temptation
Ramblings From A Mum 
Impetuous, impulsive and rather moving…
Thank you, I am glad you felt this.
I agree with the other commenter. This is very moving.
Thanks Bo appreciated.
Agree also. Very moving.
Thank you Lyn xx
wow, Mum your poetry has really evolved… I am impressed you paint such vivid pictures, and churn up such raw emotions…
Andrea – thank you so much – it was a bit ‘rhyme-y’ if such a word! but it makes me happy that you have said what you did, I guess because I write so very often things are changing, from when I first started out. Bless ya lovely xx 🙂
I also felt the earth move when I read this 🙂
Chookas you weren’t…um er…you know at the time were you;-) thank you darling. xxx
LOL! I may or may not have been …. 😉
Very interesting…..so she leaves her child as well?
Oh nooo she takes her child to live with him, she just left the jerk of a husband 😉 xx
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🙂 back at ya xx
very moving indeed….thanks for sharing this
Wayne I thank you from someone who wrote a piece so beautiful for this prompt – that is indeed a compliment.
passionate and sensual!!
Hello darling girl – thank you kindly 🙂 xxx
Di….. one word ooer 😉 xx
There are notes of both desperation and determination here.
Hello Nell, thank you for popping over and commenting. Yes there is a touch of both I do agree.
temptation succumbed to — done very well 🙂
mwaaaah lovey – thank you kindly x