Trifextra Challenge Week 60 We are giving you three words and asking that you add another 33 to them to make a complete 36-word response. You may use the words in any order you choose.
Our three words are:
remember
rain
rebellion
Pure rebellion
I stand
against the
squall
face
body soaked
relentless rain
I weep
tears meld
hit the ground
reflection of yesterdays
knowing
time does not stand still
remember
I scream
be courageous
fight on
This is for Trifecta
I am in a slightly dark place at the moment hence the above
Ramblings From A Mum 
What is it today about these prompts? I moment I read these three words I saw somewhat of another connection to your plight.
Do you REMEMBER the day I lead a REBELLION against our dictatorial boss; the RAIN never dampen our fortitude as we stood united without a whimper, and he lost his voice yelling at us we’re fired.
You have connected well – and yes the prompts are of a similar theme it seems. Hopefully later I can write something a little more uplifting. Thanks for your version – xx
You’re quite welcomed. I’ve got to wonder if some bird had whispered somthing in the ear of the person who creates these prompts about you. This is a crazy thought which has popped into my head.
They are just prompts that I enter on various sites…don’t think there is a bird involved…but perhaps there is…perhaps you aren’t crazy
good picture of a life well lived – standing against the foe. 🙂
Hello Barbara – I thank you and yes …standing up against the world in times when it is required is an empowering feeling. x
Love this one! Can really feel it.
I thank you so very much my lovely. xx
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I think the style of this is so unique, again – really like it. Powerful…as always…
I am humbled kind sir – thank you..
i love the way you organize the words on the page here it adds to the emotion of the words. Great job
Thank you so much Sam, I wish I could do more ..I think I have to upgrade…I like the choppiness sometimes in what I write, brings a different feel.
This is so gorgeously written – love the structure, love the strength behind the words. Well done!
Suzanne many thanks for reading.
Well done, Rambly!
and I give you a thank you xx
keep up the courage:)
Thank you Sandra I shall try. Appreciate your thoughts. xx
You know I love your words! I hope today is good for you!
I am ok at night then when I wake reality hits me in the face, tomorrow the search begins in earnest! Thank you for loving my words as I do yours. x
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You have a distinct style of writing and arranging your thoughts. Love it!
Thank you so much for reading Ritu and the visit- appreciated.
Your piece is dark but hopeful. Nothing wrong with dark anyway. Well done.
I was in a dark place LD when writing (still am a little – lost my job) so this prompt came at an opportune time. I do enjoy the dark to the light, at least writing about it. Thanks for reading me. 🙂
wonderful imagery.
Appreciated BR.
The image of standing in the squall is a powerful one. I hope the advice in the last few lines is taken.
I need to convince myself of that’s all – thanks Draug. x
There aren’t many pieces of writing that engage me like this one-I felt the exhaustion, and the determination, and the refusal to give up. Stellar work!
I graciously accept your comments and I feel privileged that you feel this way about my piece – thank you so much for reading.
I like the way this piece moves. Fight On!
Yes the rebellion the inner fortitude and want not to lose hope in adversity..if only I had more words to play with! Thank you for reading Vanessa.
Oh, wow. This is beautiful!
Lori I thank you so very much for your thoughts and for reading – appreciated.
Some times, often, I wish time would just slow the hell down so I could catch up. I really liked the formatting here, too, Rambly.
I think we all do at some point in our lives Gina…too much…too little time, thank you for reading and commenting. Appreciated.
Love that the rain is relentless. Great piece!
Kymm thank you also for your lovely comments, rain like emotions are relentless, bombarding our thoughts and our bodies.
Rebelling against the squall..in hopes of venting out all the grief. What time has taken away is always an ache.
Your comment answered what I was trying to portray – thank you and thank you for reading Sini.
Sometimes life’s rain batters us from all sides & we feel helpless & hopeless but as you have so beautifully said,that we must not give in,but keep fighting:-)A wonderful piece with reality bytes 😀
‘A’ thank you honey for your kind words, I shall keep fighting, or try too I am glad you read and enjoyed. x
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There is a poem by the name Invictus that this entry made me think of, It starts: Out of the night that covers me… , it is a powerful poem.
I shall definitely have a look as I do not know of it – thank you Lacey for reading.
Thank you for, as always, creating excellent work. I appreciate the brilliance and passion that you bring to every piece you create. You are a gifted talent and we, your readers, are wondrously lucky to know you through your work and your comments. Good luck in the days and weeks to come. Hope everything turns out to be ok. 🙂
Tom , I had to re-read what you had written. My first thought was he is ‘taking the mickey out of me’, because my comments on other works are very basic, as I truly haven’t learnt to ‘read’ verse as yet. I am feeling very humbled at what you wrote about me..quite ‘gob-smacked’ in fact. Writing is like breathing to me – I couldn’t live without it and I so appreciate your kindness like others who comment in this way. Thank you also for your wishes – I hope so too. x
Tears meld together – Neat.
Glad you liked Kelly – appreciate you reading.
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Great trifecta piece!
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Thank you kindly sweety 🙂 xx