Remember…Rain…Rebellion

Trifextra Challenge Week 60   We are giving you three words and asking that you add another 33 to them to make a complete 36-word response.  You may use the words in any order you choose.

Our three words are:

remember
rain
rebellion

Pure rebellion
I stand
against the
squall

           face
body soaked

relentless rain
I weep

         tears meld
hit the ground

reflection of yesterdays

         knowing
time does not stand still
remember

           I scream
be courageous
fight on

This is for Trifecta

Picture11-1-1I am in a slightly dark place at the moment hence the above

54 thoughts on “Remember…Rain…Rebellion

  1. What is it today about these prompts? I moment I read these three words I saw somewhat of another connection to your plight.

    Do you REMEMBER the day I lead a REBELLION against our dictatorial boss; the RAIN never dampen our fortitude as we stood united without a whimper, and he lost his voice yelling at us we’re fired.

      • You’re quite welcomed. I’ve got to wonder if some bird had whispered somthing in the ear of the person who creates these prompts about you. This is a crazy thought which has popped into my head.

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    • I was in a dark place LD when writing (still am a little – lost my job) so this prompt came at an opportune time. I do enjoy the dark to the light, at least writing about it. Thanks for reading me. 🙂

  4. There aren’t many pieces of writing that engage me like this one-I felt the exhaustion, and the determination, and the refusal to give up. Stellar work!

  5. Sometimes life’s rain batters us from all sides & we feel helpless & hopeless but as you have so beautifully said,that we must not give in,but keep fighting:-)A wonderful piece with reality bytes 😀

  6. Thank you for, as always, creating excellent work. I appreciate the brilliance and passion that you bring to every piece you create. You are a gifted talent and we, your readers, are wondrously lucky to know you through your work and your comments. Good luck in the days and weeks to come. Hope everything turns out to be ok. 🙂

    • Tom , I had to re-read what you had written. My first thought was he is ‘taking the mickey out of me’, because my comments on other works are very basic, as I truly haven’t learnt to ‘read’ verse as yet. I am feeling very humbled at what you wrote about me..quite ‘gob-smacked’ in fact. Writing is like breathing to me – I couldn’t live without it and I so appreciate your kindness like others who comment in this way. Thank you also for your wishes – I hope so too. x

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