the moment that my
beating heart
stopped
in my solitude of
self
no recognition made of
others
that wept or held my
hand
there was calm
my vision that was
blinded
grew much darker than
before
yet I felt no fear I
yielded
to the silence
overwhelming
opening my eyes with eye lids
closed
I saw the light
appear
a light that shone so brightly
beckoning to come
there
I felt the warm air touch my
skin
once more I breathed the air
I knew that life had yet not
ceased
perhaps another
life to
live
There was no need to struggle
or maintain the hardship of my
fight
thoughts that swelled
inside of me were of an after
life
I drifted and released
myself from the grounded earth
and let my soul float upwards to the
light of my
re-birth
~~~
This was created for Alastair’s Photo Fiction
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That was brilliant.
Thank you Alastair for your the photo – you inspired my words.
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Very nice. Thanks for sharing you poetry.
I thank you Jules for the visit and your lovely comment, appreciated.
Beautiful.
Thank you Nelson very much.
Another brilliant piece! π
awwww…thank you my lovely π
This poetry was apt for the photo this week. well done
Hello Nightlake – I thank you so much, it just babbled forth, but I am glad you read and liked.
Truly amazing! π
Ankita – I thank you for visiting and your lovely comment π
My pleasure π
So peaceful.
RoSy – Thank you so much, I am glad you felt peace. Thanks for popping in and reading.
That’s really inspiring. Great work.
Welcome Eagle- thank you so much for your kindness and reading, appreciated.
Truly beautiful, Mumsy! Hugs Paula xxx
I thank you my darling. xxx
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