pressed grey suit
‘pon his head he wore a hat
Percival Peppertan looked anything but playful
posing and pompous Percival couldn’t see what the fuss was all about
passed by snickered , he thought them
pathetic and rude
promoting the company that he worked for
Percival allowed himself to
peacefully through the streets
publicly, mind you and certainly not being
paid any extra, but simply for the love of their new spectacle range and he cared not if they
provoked him and said he looked stupid
Percival, was chosen, though he was considered the most
probably the most lifeless
person in the company, but he was excited at the
prospect they had
presented him with, the chance for
pedestrians to admire the new fashionable eye-wear and delighted at the
project, for alas Percival was quite a boring soul, but now, oh yes now with these, he let lose a little
providing himself with a new found freedom of himself, to be carefree and not so
possibly beneath the pompousness his watchful eyes allowed him to see a whole new world
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Another brilliant photo from the Team – but this was tough for me – so I looked on the light side – with my brain ticking over time..
wonderful, and i found myself spitting as i read all of your ‘p’s aloud )
I’m pickled that your read the ‘p’s out loud – a bit of fun perhaps – thanks Beth 🙂 x
Oh so clever…. Off to tackle mine in a while…xx
This was so tricky for me I saw the pic and positively had a meltdown! Thanks hun – will catch up with yours soon 🙂 xx
perfectly funny….perhaps amusing….,perchance your a crazy woman?…performing with words….probably passionately powerful prose ! very enjoyable Jenny
Oh Palobi puns and p’s will will be positively prevalent ..perhaps? 🙂 Thank you for perusing lovely, nice to see you popping in. xx
I need a P
please don’t let me postpone you 😉
aww thank you Nelson appreciated – just a little bit of nuttiness 🙂
But IMPOSSIBLE to try and say it all 🙂
Pfft what’s is wrong wid ‘ya – tis easy – especially after a drinki or two… 🙂 Thank you for popping in 🙂
ok, I lob a half bottle of Scotch down ma neck and try again 🙂
That’s the “Spirit” let me know how you go 😉 xx
oooh ‘watchful eyes’… sooo good, Jen!! xx
morning ssshhh hello darling how was your night? Thank you xx
oh it was really good! they loved the food, loved the wine… and now we all can go to bed with big bellies 😀
have a great day, Jen – will talk to you later… 🙂 xx
very creative. I never tired of the p’s.
P’s are good 🙂 Thank you so much angie for reading.
particularly perfect prose presentation 🙂
perfectly …pfft I have run out of peas 😦 Thank you darling 🙂
Never knew poetry could be so much fun ! great job ma’am !
Thank you sweetheart 🙂 Please call me Mum or Mumsy ma’am is way too formal 🙂
Now THAT was fun to read….
Wait … I should say it with a ‘P’….what is a synonym for fun that starts with ‘P’? Pfun?
I did love that last line *S*
awww thank you sweety – it was fun though challenging to write 🙂 xx
Love the alliterative free verse!! You are always surprising me with your various inventive ways of answering the VisDare challenge!! Love this!!
Oh Ang – thank you for being supportive- I did look at it and say ‘oh hell’ at first, but up for a challenge, away I went. Can’t wait for this weeks 🙂
I just saw the pic – let the fun begin 😉
LOL!!! So glad you jumped on in — with both prompts!!!
lol – have to wait for (my tonight) or weekend -but I shall it give it a try 🙂 Thanks Ang
Really enjoyed all those ‘p’s. Well done. Really fun and you’ve painted Percy to be a much more interesting person than people might have thought him to be when he was just plain pompous and posing.
Yes indeed a different persona indeed – thank you Sarah for reading and your comment 🙂
Pressed, practical and pensive, a great flow to this powerful punch 😉
why thank you sjP 🙂