against the doorway
I am pushed; that edge I love
the masculine boss
violence not shown
no hate unleashed or anger
piercing stare I swear
the heat extracted
burns hot, as a blacksmiths iron
soft, intense blue eyes
my breathing quickens
I anticipate your move
it is milk chocolate
smooth as silk against
my tongue, swallows and wants more
do not hesitate
your first move, your voice
perhaps soft sweet whisperings
body beckoning
how shall you begin
hot breath on quivering skin
nibbling with your teeth
gentle, with power
my resistance is futile
I need, I want ~ now
whisper words of lust
I implode with what will come
feet unsteady sway
hands upon my cheeks
lips velvet brush against mine
giddiness begins
within my cells
I awake, body arches
foreplay has begun
I evaporate
languishing into your arms
like chocolate melting
Ramblings From A Mum 
Beautifully sensual…
I liked how you ended it… ‘I evaporate languishing into your arms…’- lovely verse.
thank you HA – even with all the build up – I think that is my favourite verse..but if I merely put that..what would I have had 🙂 Thank you for reading.
Really beautiful, I love this!
Firstly welcome and thank you so much for reading and your kind comment Jayde – I am glad you did.
The urge, the seduction, the love.. Everything rolled into one beautiful writing of yours.. I enjoyed it a lot!
My sincere gratitude Ms. Owl for your kindness..or should I just say thank you 😉 x
I hear the slow motion of waves on the sand… ❤
Welcome Sisyphus and thank you so much for reading. I think I heard them too as I wrote, appreciate your comment.
My my my ooooh my
giggle giggle giggle laugh
Beautifully sensual RM, (oops nearly said something rude then…..) what I do like is how you capture the attraction, the desire and want associated with their play. Erotic and excellent. Write more???
oh I am honoured when a reader requests more, I kind of put myself in the one against the door and went from there……hmm…. oh where was I…right yes I shall try again…just for you 🙂 Thank you Summer.
Just curious to see what the next stage might be…
I shall have a think about this overnight..perhaps I will need a *warning* tag though.
you might have to put it in the adult category…..you are such a braggard….(.sigh!)
now why would I brag about that? I’m confused. *sigh* also
Desperate old man rears ugly head, whack!!! Must keep him in his box.
That’s ok – I shall forgive. Perhaps after the I wrote warning tag I should have put a 🙂 as I meant the next stage could get raunchier. I wasn’t implying it would be bloody fantastically brilliant (insert smiley face) 🙂
Why can’t it be both??
well that of course will be for the reader to decide not I 🙂
Whew…. (frantically wiping sweat from brow) As a desperate old man I was building up a little steam there, no, rather quite a head of steam indeed! Only one suggestion, lose the bloody ending – it’s a bit anticlimactic – or anti-climax-ic, as I can now honestly say! 🙂 (Darn!)
*smiles* Hi John – passes a cold face-cloth – you okay? 😉 I have now changed the ending as per your suggestion, hope you find it more fitting – thanks for the suggestion and reading 😉
hot!
🙂 glad you liked xx
hmm perhaps I should leave it as it as your punishment? 😉 x
Awwwwww 😦
You would do that?
Ahh I see, punishment you say 😀
no I’ve been good and corrected for you… but behave or I shall turn them back into your typos! lol
you are an idiot – now go try the kilt on 😉
x
oh and thanks for visiting, even though you are causing havoc lol
I am so 🙂
OK..I will stop now.
07:15 here, just in a fun mood … lol
Sorry everyone..
I will give you all $1
That should read “Lob” by the way.
My spelling is way off this morning..
😦
that one I’m leaving :-p
🙂
what the hell am I to do with you, now shoosh this instant!
deary – deary me
x
Lips are sealed…x
Sorry, fingers have behaved…
Wow I have been AWAY lol
lol 😉 xx
🙂
HUGS