cough, conflict, control these 3 words have been sent from Sarah Ann – thank you and I hope that you enjoy.
sitting cross legged on the bed
sheets crumpled underneath
I watch the candle flames
burn their brightness
with the smell of frankincense
I hold you in my arms
I have the control it seems
to do with you as I please and I
cough a little excitedly
for what that means to me
I hold you tight, you don’t resist
lying comforted in my embrace
which is different from the past
few weeks, when all we did was fight
but now there is no conflict
as I am in control, who would have
thought I’d spike your drink
allowing you to fall
ssshh ~ it will be alright my love
there is nothing you should fear
though now that you paralysed
revenge is near
so let me hold your hand ~ I swear
you won’t feel any pain
just let me heat the knife once more
and slice into your vein
©jmtacken Sept 2013
Ramblings From A Mum 
Reblogged this on ENGLISH LANGUAGE REVIEW .
Thank you for the re-blog Paul.
Well that certainly is interesting Jenny. I could feel the hot coldness in your taunt. Good read.>KB
Thank you very much KB. I tend to favour my dark side and glad that you felt the coolish tones.
ow, just when you thought your darkness couldn’t get any darker….
I am full of surprises..no? 😉 Thanks Beth. x
I like your dark side 😉
as I like yours 😉 – thanks hun xx
RM your dark side is so sensuous and attractive, where has it been all this time???
oh it’s been here 😉 …. & I thank you Summer.
Wonderful. I think we all need to stay on your bright side. 😉 Love the tender feel to the words even as the deeds are evil. ‘cough a little excitedly/ for what that means to me’ is so clever – the thrill is clear, but the reader’s mind can go all ways before reading the second stanza. Really enjoyed this. (Can’t stop smiling at your wickedness.) 🙂 🙂 🙂 Well done.
I love being wicked in fact there’s probably more wicked to come, thank you sweet for the inspiration 🙂 xx
whew…that one gave me a shiver…i wonder how often our arguments and fights are because we have lost control…i would have to say it would be a pretty high percentage…
Yes I so agree, we must be thankful that we don’t slit wrists each time we get a little cross:-) thanks for reading Brian.
Woah…I didn’t expect that ending…loved it nonetheless 🙂
why thank you sweet 🙂
Very deep Mumsy a little psychotic yet with much ardour… nice indeed x
I kind of like my psychotic side don’t you 🙂 thanks Max . xxx
Wow, Jen – what a great surprise ending!
Oh yes – may I also reblog?