“It’s over ~ I don’t love you anymore”
words stumble from your mouth
they tip from your cracked lips
to hit the floor like concrete
no emotion, no depth, they land
thinking they will impact me
wrong ~ like crocodile tears
no affect at all
false pain spreads across your face
the acting classes taught you well
I try to stop my laughter ~ crap
do you know how I have longed
for this, this farce to sacred vows
once taken in our youth
a sham that tops all others
with indiscretions along the way
but it’s I who’ll have the last word
when you hear our love was broken
years before your decision to end it all
and I’ll wait for your reaction
the false pain you show ~ will then be real
©jmtacken 19/11/13
I don’t know why this has grabbed hold of me tonight – this is Part 2 and hopefully concludes at (Part 3) tomorrow night – bear with me readers.
Beautiful Jenny, love that simile. A great image of a false lover.
Thank you very kindly my good friend – appreciate your comments as always 🙂
whew…some determined speak….the last bit of vengence as well to take control for them and to be the one to end it…
nothing like a little bit of power 😉 thank you Bri for reading. 🙂
This is no pity party but pay back. Ouch. I know the feeling. 😉
Yes – think perhaps most of us do Tess 🙂 thank you reading hun. x
Thanks for the reading.
🙂 how sweet are you x
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Wow, that was pretty powerful, I loved it! Hugs Paula xxxx
thank you my lovely..will email you later… take care {{HUGSSSSS}} XXXX
keep it coming jen, you are on an intensity roll )
lol one more tonight – have to get my mo-jo back! 🙂 thank you hun. x
Ha! 😉 Now that is a strong woman. I particularly loved this bit: “words stumble from your mouth they tip from your cracked lips to hit the floor like concrete” 🙂
Thank You! for I was un-decided about using concrete 🙂 Made my day! 🙂
I really liked the imagery in this one – well done, and powerful.
thank you darling last one now – if I get my brain working 😦 xx
you have such a way with words my dear friend………. love it
aww bless ya cotton socks – thanks honey 🙂 xx