I haven’t loved you ~ for ever
the words almost vomit from my mouth
with the speed I wish to speak
your skin turns ashen grey
trying to absorb the words I said
in fact, the truth, will spear your skin
you’ve had your one night stands
but that’s not what clinched the deal
you lived your life with yourself
your love for what you craved
the existence you were comfy with
the brick wall was evident
I tried in the beginning
till it grew too much to bear
your obsession, your
“this is who I am”
please, give me a fuckin’ break
partnerships are two not one
you hid yourself from me
your love of you, caved my love
I don’t need this any more
it’s pointless to continue
to pretend our love was true
there are no tears to be shed
will divy up the chattels
you can start your life ~ with you
the thing that may cut the most
your brother makes love tenderly
far better than you ever could
ouch ~ sorry ~ does that hurt my love
as I walk past you to the door
when the blade plunges in my back
~ who has the last word now
©jmtacken 20/11/2013
I am very tired tonight – so I hope you accept the Finale to my Series.
Ramblings From A Mum 
ooh, cuts like a knife, no pun intended. excellent series.
smiles ~ thanks so much sweetness. xx
I know this guy except for the last verse. Cuts well and deep. 😉
Hmm I think I knew him too…seems to be many around…thankfully the last stanza was not the outcome for either of us 😉 Thanks for reading Tess. x
You’re welcome. 🙂
wow…. strong ringing words….love it
Hmm felt a bit oooo ahhhh about the f word – but we are all adults and truly it HAD to be that word. – thanks so much 🙂 xx
I think the poem is a great end to the series I especially like the cutting end, with reference to the brother, no man would want to hear that utter humiliation. Well done Jenny
The vitriol and resentment wow and as Michael said the utter humiliation of her ex in closing, powerful, powerful emotions! Fantastically done Jenny!
thank you so much sweet – I am happy that you felt and enjoyed. xx
Very much =)
you are lovely ~ thank you {hugs}
(hugs back) so are you I am so happy we met!
me to…I have had a difficult night my next piece will reflect that…I only hope it makes sense. x
I am sorry to hear you had a difficult night, I hope you are feeling better and that you will have many wonderful nights. You do a masterful job conveying emotion so no doubt it will
…thank you, it hasn’t been easy… I am just pouring out my emotions …as I need to
This series packs a real punch, Jennie. Reminds me of my ex-narc.
Thanks sweet ~ yes there are a few out there like this I am sure and your ex ~ well best we just forget all about him 😉 xx
snap. the brother thing in the end…ouch…low…yeah that one will leave a mark…
we know where to get for it to hurt… thanks for reading Bri.
Miss you so nice to see this newer photo Did you ever land that job are you now doing it for pay I hope so with all my heat. XO
(hugs) thank you hun, yes I have conducted 3 services now ~ and love it – though still get a little nervy in the beginning 🙂 What heat?? 😉 xx
LMAO HEART!!!!!!!!!!
roflmao right then got ‘ya now 😀 xxx
🙂
IO am so happy you are back to work and doing something you love.
thank you – the only issue I have is I need more work – designing a website at the moment – so hopefully… it’s terrible having to rely on people…. in order to acquire an income… xx
Oh ouch, the brother! Excellent, Jen! 🙂
tad sting I would think? 😉 Thanks babes. xx
I thought it was a lovely payback 😉 (I’m not here, I’m sleeping …zzzz hehe) xx
of course you are zzzzz – not 🙂 xxx