hands held pulses stitched together
our hearts were then sewn forever
these days I beg to remember
we were tethered ~ we were tethered
like an intricate tapestry
woven colours for all to see
remember what you were to me
embroidery ~ embroidery
©jmtacken Jan 2014
Photo Credit: http://bjws.blogspot.com
Trying my hand/mind with another form.
The monotetra is a poetic form developed by Michael Walker.
Here are the basic rules:
Comprised of quatrains (four-line stanzas) in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of 8 syllables per line.
Each quatrain consists of mono-rhymed lines (so each line in the first stanza has the same type of rhyme, as does each line in the second stanza, etc.)
The final line of each stanza repeats the same four syllables
This poem can be as short as one quatrain and as long as a poet wishes
remember what you were to me is the line that caught me…there is emotion twined in that plee…
i like the metaphor in sewing as well…
possibly followed on from the DV piece you think? Smiles. Thank you Brian so very much.
For impressed Jenny love it! I have never been able to make sense of meter
Perhaps 3 impressed lol, how cute, thank you honey, I’m just learning and hopefully remembering! x
Very not for I can’t even explain that typo lol
I’m a smidge confused too, but I like it 🙂 x
Beautiful I love it !
Thank you honey 🙂 xx
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and there is always the thread that holds you together
Good morning lovely – yes there is 🙂 xx
Thank you Sarah x