come join me in the river of my dreams
amid crystal waters
I will lay as I was born
bathing in the rill
let me douse myself in you
do not let me waken
nor disturb tranquility
for in dreams, I do not seek reality
©jmtacken Feb 2014
Last night I wanted to write and had a nudge on my piece Laced Emotion from Brian, then the word crystal was given to me from Richard from richardankerswrites~ so thank you both.
Dreams can touch on reality in a very unrealistic way. Nicely done Jenny.
Thank you my friend..short and sweet for a change.
Really like this one, and the picture too. 🙂
Thank you ma dear 🙂
Well done J. That was a great poem and great use of the word, crystal. (Don’t forget, nonchalant underpants next LOL)
I’m still laughing.. you never know…it may very well happen 😉 and bows.
Love it ! Honestly a soul poem! xx
Thank you once again lovely xx
🙂 😉 🙂 ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) ;):) 😉
Goodness me! Lol 🙂 thank you. xx
you’re welcome! xx
Cleansing immersion for body and soul. 🙂
Nicely put 🙂 x
Just read about an immersion deprivation tank this morning. You’re locked in this vault and immersed in salt water so you’re buoyant, in the dark, and alone. Supposed to be relaxing.
Nah. Not for me.
I’m with you, perhaps a little more frightening than relaxing…claustrophobia anyone? !
Oh how stunning! Who WOULD want to find reality in dreams????
I guess it depends on what the reality is… Thank you hun x
🙂 sometimes I have ’em
just float )
and drift and forget, thanks gorgeous. xx
Immersing myself in the mystical beauty of this poem, Jenny!
Appreciate you doing so DM, thank you so much. Smiles.
that last line kinda sets this on its head….the dreams not being about reality…
would we not want our reality to be more like our dreams…i dunno…you got me thinking.
Depends on what you dream… In the moment in dreams, do we not wish to be left alone to enjoy them and not face the real world? Then again you have me thinking about it too! Smiles.
beautiful, I loved it….
Thank you so much Yvonne xx
Gosh you’re getting good at this! 🙂
lol you made me smile – ta muchly xx