Glass
Transparent
for the most part
Mirrors
Reflections
hide the flaws
Cracks
Can appear
pieces don’t fall
Shatter
Unrecognisable
as part of what was
Isn’t
there
anymore
Copyright JMTacken 28.7.2014
I wrote this not because my state of mind was low at the time of writing, it just came out this way with the photo chosen.
so nice to see your poetry again, jen )
A pleasure to write it hun – thank you xx
I think it works wonderfully J
And I thank you R for saying so.
Welcome J
🙂
Nice poem and the picture fits it perfectly.
Thank you very much GC.
Love the picture and the poem describes the types of ‘glass’ well. 🙂
Astute..thank you darling xx
i do believe there is much more than what the glass reflects back to us…
you have to go a bit deeper to find it though…smiles…
even that shatters though….
hello. i am home. smiles.
Welcome home my friend. Yes it can go a lot deeper..but I’ve been trying to..lighten my words of late..smiles
Beautiful. Your words capture the image but go so much deeper.
Thank you so very much for reading and your kind words. Your comment went into spam, sorry for not acknowledging sooner.
Sorry for the double post!
That’s quite alright, thank you for reading and commenting ~ smiles
Beautiful. Your words capture the image and go so much deeper.
Beautiful, Jen. I love how you brought such meaning to this image.
Thank you gorgeous, I am glad you enjoyed xxx
That first time stanza can be read so many ways.
I am glad that you can 🙂 thanks Sarah xx
beautifully done.
Thank you Yelena for reading and your lovely words ~ appreciated.
You words make me feel like the picture is more introspective. Much more.
Perhaps it is… Thank you Colleen xx
Interesting ideas Jenny. Well done.
Thank you Michael, I’m glad you thought so.
Beautiful hidden depth. You always have such a sly way of looking beneath the surface that gets me thinking. 🙂
Perhaps beneath the mirror? Smiles. Thank you sweety for reading. xx
I think we often do our best work when we are at our lowest. Xxx
I think you maybe right, thank you for the compliment sweetheart xx
🙂
You know I love you 😛 x
Welcome back..yes and ditto <3. xx
Panes and pains – this is lovely, Jen and really matches the picture xxxx
Thank you precious xxx
Hi Jen, I just got back from a trip to Maryland, so I’m catching up. I love the analogy of glass to a mirror – one’s transparent, one’s reflective. You and your daughter… Love this! ❤ ~Karen~
Thank you my lovely lady,, always such kind and complimentary comments, which I appreciate greatly ❤ x