you hold me
in that space where there is safety
always
I count your love on pebbled beaches
my footsteps unsure
you balance me
I count your love on mountain ledges
huddled
scared of my surroundings
your hands reach out
I drift at times unknowing
you ground me
no doors that you won’t open
I trust
we harmonise
your voice
is love on my pillow
Copyright JMTacken 12.10.2014
Stunning Jen, just stunning. ❤
Thank you lovely for reading, have been absent for a few days. ❤
It’s okay. Been difficult to get to this weekend myself. Life happens. 😀
i count love on mountain ledges…love that line….those last 3 lines as well…the voice on the pillow…this is a beautiful poem…
Thank you so much Bri, your comments mean a great deal to me.
Just beautiful 🙂
Thank you my friend.
Welcome
what a lovely tribute to the one you love )
Thanks Beth, haven’t written for 10 days. Had no poetry then at 11:45 last night this came. ❤
This poem bought and sold me! Great! xxxxxxxxxxx
Bargain price I hope! Thank you darling for reading xxoo
How sweet! That last verse is beautiful… : “your voice is love on my pillow”. 🙂
Thank you Anmol for reading, glad you liked, at first I was unsure about that last line, but it seems to fit. 🙂
Trusting is such a great place to be in Jenny, well done some beautiful thoughts contained in your words.
Thank you Michael and yes it is. Appreciate you reading.
So nice to have that type of security in love. Awesome. Well said, Jen. Well painted. ❤
Thank you Tess, yes I can vouch for the security. I am glad you enjoyed, thank you for reading darling. ❤ x
You are always welcome. The pleasure is all mine, Jen. ❤
Hugs across the oceans ❤ xx
Such a powerful poem. Lovely work.
Thank you gorgeous, appreciate you reading.
My pleasure!
😊
You certainly have a gift, Jen ❤
As have you, thank you darling ❤
Balance. I love the very last line. Sums up love so very beautifully.
Thank you sweetheart ❤
an excellent place for love to be… on the pillow 🙂 ~
So it is, thank you I charl ☺️
This was so sweetly done, loved it, Jen! the pillow part and the reaching while on the mountain’s ledge, all so comforting…
Bless you darling one ❤
Bless you back, Jen! hugs xoxo
Trust and Love Jen are treasured feelings indeed. I feel your very beautiful poem just tumbled out…. always the best work, coming forth from truth and need. See you soon 💋