These words came up through our little poetical intercourses a few of us are having ….um-ah- rude word.
Anywhoo – The words elegant smut soooooo – ok whilst driving to the beach today I had to stop and buy a notepad – this was the result – 1st attempt.. Critiques Welcome.
Corset tight
cinched
as the middle
figure eight
layers
stockings
petticoat
lace
all in place
garter
bowed bodice
down low
anticipating
rose water dabbed
hair brushed
100 strokes
bees wax
red stain
on lips
that are hushed
rouge on cheek
and bossom that shows
unveil
a healthy glow
hand remains longer
than common decency
would allow
thoughts wicked
layers lifted
desire driven
elegant smut
pleasure given
ramblingsfromamum 31.12.2012
Ah yes–it’s all about anticipation isn’t it? Half the fun of getting a gift is unwrapping it…first with the mind, then with the hands, then with the…
JC I’m shocked! roflmao… ahem but did you like?
1.1.2013 – I read this back this morning and I hopefully have apologised on JC’s site for my impudence. I can only say ‘ the wine made me do it’. I have no right to ask this question – none at all and I am frankly embarrassed by it. So instead of taking the said question off – I hope that this apology covers what I needed to say.
If i could hit that like button softly, sweetly….repeatedly…I would…
“Elegant Smut”
Was it Susan who coined that? Sounds like the perfect title for a book of compiled poems…hmmm….
I honestly can’t remember if it was me or Susan, but for some reason I couldn’t get it out of head.
Words,words,words,rambling,rambly words …ok I’ve lost it.
JC ….. ooer 😉
Woah!!! Nice…and I loved the title 😉
Thank you RG – a little different I guess 🙂