Haiku Heights # 213
The topic this week is CACOPHONY suggested by Becca Givens.
Deafening silence
body language against mine
love life discordant
Don’t know if I have quite ‘got this’ – open for critique – thank you
Ramblings From A Mum
This is my journey, my thoughts, my views, plain and simple and from my heart. Please travel with me and share, hopefully it will be an interesting trip.
Ramblings From A Mum 
I think it’s pretty great!
Thank you Lyn 🙂 xx
Very well written!
You got it!
Alice welcome and thank you for reading and your comments – a great compliment 🙂
Thanks Bo – to answer your question am I published (from a previous post) – no not with poetry because honestly compared to many I do not think mine are that worthy of publishing. Only my Memoir at the moment, but I would like one day to be able to be in the ‘league’ of published poets!
I think you should consider it. You have an amazing talent.
Aww Bo you are being too kind. It is but a dream, but I so want to thank you for saying what you have. It inspires me greatly to continue what I do. One never thinks of having talent, I know I can write and can describe my thoughts..but I feel there are so many more talented than I. A lovely thought and very kind words to say however and I thank you. xx
For my money, you ‘got it’ quite well – VERY nicely done! —Clyde
Clyde- thank you reading and your thoughts 🙂
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a too-true haiku! nice
Joanne – Thank you so much!
well done, very well done. I liked your take on it the word very much. See I did not distract you that much– you spun a masterpiece
Awww bless ‘ya I wouldn’t say masterpiece, but I thank you very muchly 😉 xx
of course you wouldn’t– that is why I did 🙂
mwaaaaahhhhhhhhh pumpkin 🙂 xx
Nailed it!
Yee Haa thanks Sam 🙂