Close distance Haiku

Haiku Heights # 213

The topic this week is CACOPHONY suggested by Becca Givens.

Deafening silence
body language against mine
love life discordant

Don’t know if I have quite ‘got this’ – open for critique – thank youHaikuBadge_Final


19 thoughts on “Close distance Haiku

  1. well done, very well done. I liked your take on it the word very much. See I did not distract you that much– you spun a masterpiece

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