I am taking a different path with this photo and not continuing with my version of the Blind Sight theme this week. I hope you enjoy – open as always for critique.
Red hair braided conceals flaws
untidy wisps curl
to softly fall
upon her cheek
highlighted with blonde
nestles amongst the
colouring from birth
pale translucent skin not a blemish
or freckle have left their mark
blue the colour worn to compliment
is she perfection
head held high
or this pristine weave merely
a disguise
her face not turned to
show us does she smile or
does she cry
the perfect her the perfect braid
what indeed would we see…..
should she ever pass by
For-
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We hide behind our appearances. Woven well rambly
Why thank you madam..even liked the woven part in your comment 🙂
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Very good! Nice use of the prompt!
Thanks Joe!
I love how you transformed this photo…
Hugsss Bo – thank you – yes a slightly different take, than what even I imagined it to be.
Oh, interesting. You went with all the impressions of the photo how they came. I couldn’t help being hung up by the conduit on the wall when I tried that.
Anne isn’t this weird, I never even saw those until you mentioned and I had to take another look. Hope you enjoyed 🙂 Thank you for reading.
Well constructed! I’m now wondering what is on the other side as well 😀
Hmm perhaps for another time…but knowing my brain at the moment I shall forget and forge on with something completely. Thanks chookas xx
I believe at time there are tracks of water….
ok you have me a little puzzled with this line…accentuate a little more young lady xxx
I liked the idea that braided here conceals flaws. When my hair is long enough and it’s not cooperating, that’s exactly what I do wit it! The last line was beautiful as well, writing about what is not there.
Thank you Ermilia I am happy that you enjoyed it 🙂
All I could think about while reading this was Anne of Green Gables. I will no doubt have to watch then entire series now – to stop thinking about her.. lol
It’s one of my favorites – just as well.. lol
Beautifully written!
xox
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Thank you so much Lou, I must admit I had forgotten about many of these, so thank you for your trip back I time 🙂 let me know when you watch it 😉 xx