I catch waves
in-between fingers
hit the ground
like my thoughts
soaking into heated sand
they evaporate
©jmtacken Jan 2014
I haven’t played with forms for a long time ~ thought I would try one now and then.
Shadorma is a Spanish 6-line syllabic poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllable lines respectively.
Photo Credit: kezzi-rose.deviantart.com
Ramblings From A Mum 
I have not heard of that form. 🙂 You did it beautifully.
Thank you so much, want to try a few newer ones…there are SO many..could take a while.
Where are you finding them?
http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/poem-types-a-list-of-poetry-forms
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Thank you
welcome – enjoy 🙂
Lovely piece and form!
Thank you so very much 🙂
This form is new to me, but I loved what you did with it! 😀
Thank you very much lovely 🙂
Beautiful as always 🙂
Thank you so very much Tina for your kind words. x
I haven’t written a Shadorma in a long time. I forgot how beautiful it is. this is lovely!
Thank you! Some forms scare me, but this seemed okay ~ smiles! appreciate your kindness.
Lovely Jenny, captured so well. Excellent my friend.
Thank you very much Michael 🙂
its a cool form….hopefully not too man of those thoughts evaporate…smiles…with the waves….i really need to go to the beach…
Some are needed, some need to evaporate..one wave not like the other perhaps?
Thank you B ~ appreciated! beach in your weather?? ~ smiles
This is very clever and interesting!!
Thank you sweety 🙂 xx
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oh, i like this form, jen. i’ve never heard of it
thank you hun, I do too, I was scouring the net at 2.30am and found this site..tonight/today perhaps another.. xx
Another beauty Jenny =) You really have a talent for forms
Thank you sweety, don’t know about talent, just have to follow the rules lol xx
Definitely talent
huggin you right now 🙂 xx